Pretty good animation + everything, but it seems like all you're doing is recreating a knox animation. Try a different brand of humor in your next animation.
Well, I am inspired alot by knox's humor and weirdness but this was pretty much the end of trying to be like knox (if you look at the sequals, they are less like knox's)
thanks for telling my what you think about it - I like to know what people think of my movies. And thansk for giving it a 7 :)
Looks good, but could be a lot better...
Okay, I'm going to review this more critically than I usually do since I can tell you have potential as an animator.
The story I've found is a little too contrived for me to fully get into it. There's nothing new about it in contrast to other fantasy. The dialogue is pretty corny too. However, this isn't that big a deal. I don't come to Newgrounds to be blown over by storylines.
The animation is really inconcistant. I can tell you put quit a bit of effort into it Lots of shots look great, but others just don't look good. I'd like to see a lot less tweens and more keyframe animation.
You seem like a pretty good drawer, but it's a shame you're limiting yourself to typical fantasy art. It seems like most of your drawings are taken from Diablo II or something. Of course, now that you've started the series with fantasy characters there's not much I can do about that. I'd like to see you try something non-fantasy, and much more from your imagination.
All in all, although I'm not a fan of the Paladin series, I can appreciate the effort you put into it. Good work so far, but I know you can do better!
Neither were great but...
I WAS SOOOOO CLOSE!!!!! Wow great game. Good Job. Awesome graphics and gameplay. Cool concept. Not much wrong with this at all.
Democratics are the only americans cool enough to roll with Canada. The rest of you can go away please. Good game, but I'm pretty biased. Go Kerry!
Reminicent of an early day zelda. one thing. . .
When u get the key in waterworld, yo cant stop the starfish from killing you. Also, maybe make it a bit harder. . . apart from that, an awesome game.
You make my ears bleed
Look, only people who's balls have dropped would pull this of, fortunately, all those who's aformentioned balls have dropped gain dignity, whish you are lacking in spades. Apart from your blatant lack of pubes, let's analyze what else is wrong with this.
1) Your voice - It sounds like your scared to speak loudly. In fact, half the time you were drowned out by the, ahem, "beat". Okay. So your voice isn't deep yet, thats cool. But for fuck's sake, if you're going to try and do something like this (which i suggest you don't), make you voice a little deeper for crying out loud.
2) The beat - What, did you spend fifteen minutes mixing the microsoft interface SFX on your 30 day trial version of acid foundry?
3) The lyrics - Well, for one, I don't think the first half even rhymed, it was just you spouting sweet nothings. And then you state you smoke crack. Look, even though you obviously only listen to Nelly or quote "rappers" endquote of that callibur, rappers, as a rule, don't say they smoke crack. ODB himself, possibly the biggest crackhead in the rapper world, if not THE world, never rapped about his addiction. RIP.
If this is a joke, make it obvious. As it is, you've given the impression you're dead serious. This gives me little recourse but to tell you why what youre doing is wrong. And for fuck's sake, if you're going to give yourself a rapper's personae, don't fucking put corky romano as your favorite movie. Please stop this. There's no need to get beaten up more than you already do.
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